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My ATM Experience (Valcee)

From the #Chronicles Of Valcee we present to you
#My ATM experience (Thriller from the story, #7 Days)

…on arriving the ATM stand I met a middle aged man who I guessed would be at his late 60s rushing out from the ATM, He couldnt even reply my greetings. I wondered the kind profitable business he was up to. Or maybe it was a case of emergency, his close  relative might be in hospital who knows.
I imagined the doctor telling him he needed to bring deposit before they can start their treatment. That’s the kind of Nation we are in.
I wanted to insert my card and discovered there was a card inside, it was then that my eyes caught what was written on the ATM screen “…do you wish to process another transaction?” Then the reality hit me; The man just forgot his ATM. The Bank was not yet opened, I remembered the man zooming off with his SUV after slamming the door of his car. 

I didn’t know what prompted me and I pressed the “YES” button. And it gave the usual response “please insert your pin” So many combination clouded my mind and I pressed “four zeros” “the pin you just entered was incorrect”. I thought for seconds, removed the card, checked the 16 digits at the back of the card and decided to use the last four digits.

Just like magic it worked, my heart started beating fast as I stared at the options glaring at me. I clicked the ” Check balance ” button and was marveled at what I saw, the bank account I was holding its ATM card has exactly 5 million Naira. I froze, was trembling and sweating at the same time. Different thoughts ran across my mind. “Val, you don blow. Withdraw some cash…” “go with the ATM” “No, just withdraw and leave the ATM” and of course the other calm voice ; “Val, Don’t withdraw from the account, it’s not yours”

I yielded to the former and made withdrawal of 50k. I was all smiles as I heard the shuffling sound of the ATM counting the cash. Then the money came out but as I was about collecting it I felt a heavy knock on my head, “Is this real?” I thought, I felt another one and turned lo and behold I met the angry and ugly face of my roommate- Paul.

Paul: Guy you dey mad o, why you dey smile for sleep? You dey toast girl bah?, abii na girl dey toast you? Abeg get up, remember you said you wan go Bank early. Guy go withdraw and give me that my money, I no get shi shi again. Remember to buy 1 carton of noodles too.

“So it was only a dream?” I thought. I got down from my bed, prepared and went to withdraw with the dream still playing on my head.
On reaching the ATM, I saw one fair slim beautiful girl rushing out from the ATM. She was the perfect description of my kind of woman. She wore red Man Utd jersey on top of a blue tight jean trousers, with a matching sneakers. Oh! My love for girls wearing Man Utd jersey.

“Hi, hope the ATM is paying?” But she ignored me. The scent of her perfume filled my nostrils as I turned to take a survey of her backside which wasn’t too big but well shaped and curved. What a wonderful creature!
I was about inserting my card when I noticed a card was still in side, which I guessed belonged to the girl that just left. I remembered my dream. Is this a dream come true???

………………………to be continued

#7 Days(Action, Romance, Hatred, Betrayal, Crime, Love, Lust) 18+
Coming soon…

Writer- Azuka Valentine Chizoba(Val C)

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